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The Inspector Online: Team Fortress 2

Discussion in 'Team Fortress 2' started by Anonymous, Aug 24, 2011.

  1. khadgar

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    Cauchemar 1 - The Inspector 2 :lol:
     
  2. Anonymous

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    Okay, let's stop with the kindergarten and be straight for a minute, ok?

    I've seen a couple of your Inspector episodes - reviews and onlines and I think the biggest problem with your show is that it's boring and very bland. Reasons for this are that your reviews don't really have a pacing and that your character is completely run-of-the-mill.
    The lacking pacing probably comes from the fact, that your reviews don't really have a real buildup. Instead of going in a crescendo, slowly building up to some sort of climax, it's just the same dull thing for 6-8 minutes. I'm not saying that you should go all angry and go "WHARRGARBL" at the end (far from it actually, since that's even more overdone than your character), but it should have at least some sort of exciting end.
    Second your character. The PCGameInsepctor might as well be a soundboard as far as I'm concerned, since the only thing he does is spout around posh british phrases. That's something (as you can tell from the comments) every numbnut can pull off and makes your character generic. Try to give him some personality, some color. Just something that puts him above of "random guy doing a posh british accent". Maybe let him talk about something that happened in his private life. I mean during the online episodes you'd have more than enough time to talk about Mr. Lemonworth's tomfooleries or something else.

     
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    Aha i only just realised that "The Inspector" on our forum is the real Inspector :D
     
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    Kinda agreeing with Cauchemar. It's really cool, and I loved the first few vids, but it's getting old very quickly because you keep doing the exact same.
     
  5. JaptorResus

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    Then avoid to watch them, it is that easy.
    Good job on that Inspector, I was quite entertained.
     
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    I just want to help him really... I think he has a very cool concept. I see the potential, it could be much more if you ask me. And that makes it more fun for him, us and the people on the server. :)
     
  7. Anonymous

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    I always considered this argument to be pretty absurd:

    "Why do you watch the movie, if you don't like it?"
    "Why do you play the game, if you don't like it?"
    "Why do you eat that, if you don't like it?"

    In order to get a good impression of something you've got to give it a chance - otherwise you're just a prejudiced twat. I could've stayed with my initial impression, which is he being a rather obnoxious attention whore posting his unfunny videos all over the place, but instead I decided to take a second look and go a bit deeper.
    And my final conclusion was that one above. Of course I just could've kept that for myself, but I figured he could profit from someone writing a comment that is a tid bit more elaborate than "LOL U AWSUM!" or "OMG U SUK!". In the end my post is there to help him improve his show, not to bash it down. I point out to him why I'm particularly fond of his show to give him hints, how he could potentially fix those issues. Of course I could've also pointed out the good parts like let's say his facial expressions, but meh... humanity prefers to bitch instead of praise.

    But in the end he doesn't need to listen to me - I'm just one of his many viewers that just wanted to express his opinon.
     
  8. Anonymous

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    that was funny cant wait to see more :D
     
  9. Pablosky

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    Yes, you can.
     
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    Panromir "10/10 amazing guy"

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    [Generic post to get +1 post. and i like the show :p.]
     
  13. Anonymous

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    Working on another one of these videos right now.
     
  14. B.A baramous

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    you could try to join the saxton hale server of lethal zone, it has many talkers normally :p
     
  15. fatboy not slim[nl]

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    yes it is talking talking talking talking talking talking
     
  16. Anonymous

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    [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SH8CqFPRIVA[/youtube]
     
  17. khadgar

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    Darn.... I really wish that Sing-a-long would have started :lol:
     
  18. Anonymous

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    This stuff is pure gold. Great stuff.
     
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  20. Anonymous

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    [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YBqL9tM9BY8[/youtube]